>>47 俺は問題集の解答例みたいに上等な文章は書けないと思って、あまり参考にしなかった 質問３つあるだろ、質問１つにつき１０語程度の簡単な文を２〜３個ひねり出して 意味がつながるようにbut, because, as a resultとか適当な接続詞句でつなぐ 難しいことは何も言う必要はないと思う ひどいスペルミスや文法ミス、内容の矛盾等なければ１０点はもらえると思う
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準一級なんてゴミを一度でも受けたら後代に悪名を残す程の恥だったのか ミミズ以下だもんな
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>>55 >ひどいスペルミスや文法ミス、内容の矛盾等なければ１０点はもらえると思う え、そうなの? 例えば 「母親は子供の面倒をみるより 働くようになった理由は？」 I think the reason why (ここにメール発信者の質問内容を入れて)is beacause 経済の停滞。 This force mothers to work outside in order to earn money. って、こんな程度でいいのかと。 だって質問文をそのまま言い換えたレベル感で１０点はないよね。
I wanted you to post your message if you write it in English correctly. But you could not write English.
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いいよ
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>>74 you had better go to the 日本語→英語（５行以内）thread. People in that thread might make your message checked.
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絶対合格の一つ目です Dear Dan. Thank you for your writing. Firstly, I think the best season for marriage is spring because cherry blossoms , which are very beautiful are full in bloom. Secondly, "Omiai" lets you meet a person who you are not familiar with by another person's connection. In "Omiai" you and she talk with each other then, if you like her, you can propose to her. Finally, in my opinion, "Omiai" is not good the reason you cannot know who she is. In addition that, you will get married to her without knowing the true figure of her, then you may divorce... Sincerely, Risa
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format: Dear xxx Thank you for your writing Firstly ... .... Finally,... Sincrely, yyy
>>84 満点は取れないだろう。First of all, Finally..みたいな構成と、 Dear, * sincerely..は必要だが。 それを知らない人にとって見れば有益だったかもな。
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Dear Dan, Thank you for your mail. I will answer your questions. First of all, The best reason about marriage in spring is cherry blossoms is in bloom from March to April. The blossoms are known as the symbol tree of Japan. Second, Omial means an opportunity looking for the partner for getting married. And also the common person who knows the man and the woman produces the opportunity. Finally, Omial is not good. The couple don't know almost all about each other because they had never known each other until the omial. It might cause the couple to divorce more than other reasons. Sincerely, Risa word count:106 >>78 Although I haven't got good skills, I tried to improve your composition. I guess this might be less than 8 points from my experiences. You could enhance your skill if you do practices writing English a hour a day so that you could brush up your writing.
